Your local government has just recently received a large donation from an anonymous donor to improve
the community. Almost everyone agrees that the money should be invested in building a new public
facility. Which of the following do you think your local government should build?
- Build a public library
- Build a public park
- Build a public pool
Large, luscious trees, fields of grass for sports and picnics, exotic flowers, and duck ponds with fountains
and boats are all things you can experience in public parks. If my local government was deciding which to
build, I think that they should build a public park over a public library or public pool. The reasons for this
will be addressed in the following essay.
First of all, public parks are a great way for people to stay fit. There are trails for people to run around and
sports fields for athletes to play in. In my own community, people need space to be more active. Right
now, my neighbors go jogging or walk their dogs on the sidewalks next to a busy street. This is incredibly
dangerous. Not only is a park more scenic, but it is also safer than trying to get exercise near a highway. I
have also seen an outdoor workout station in the park of the next town over. I think my government
should build a park with trails, fields, and exercise machines in order to provide a safe place for people to
improve their fitness in my neighborhood.
Secondly, a public park in my community would be used all year round. Unlike a pool, which is only open
in the summer, people use the park in every season. Parks can be used for picnics, reunions, events,
festivals, and concerts. In the town that I grew up in, I remember every autumn my parents would take my
siblings and me to the park. The trees would be decorated with lights, and local businesses had tables set
up where their merchandise could be sold. There were live music and dancing under the main pavilion.
This fall festival drew in large crowds from all over the city and nearby towns. Since it can be utilized for so
many things, at any time during the year, I think that a public park is the best choice for my local
government to spend money on building.
I would recommend that my local government build a public park. Parks are a great way to get people
more active in the community because they can walk, run, and workout in the park. I also think a park is
the best option because parks can be used for a variety of events throughout the year that could be
profitable for local businesses and the community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53482587065 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30614188394 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504975124378 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0165502614 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8636363636 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166663173126 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553344054256 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600237982638 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593444655648 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444615596181 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.