1.If people want to contribute to the society, which of the following is the best way?
1- riding bicycle or walking on foot
2- recycling the waste
3- buying local organic food
Contributing to society is one of the vital elements of prosperity in every country. In my opinion, citizens should participate in riding a bicycle and walking on foot is the best way to contribute to society. My reasons are substantiated in subsequent paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that people's well-being is a momentous element in a hectic life. To clarify, nowadays, people are exposed to obesity and lung diseases due to they drive their cars a lot and do not care about their health. Vividly, using cars, people breathe the air polluted by carbon dioxide gasses which damage their bodies. By riding or walking not only people will become healthy but also they reduce a huge amount of gasses that have been released into the air, so the number of people who will be hospitalized will decrease. Additionally, in the bustle and hustle life, people by doing exercise aforementioned can get rid of their stress and depression since they can interact with other people or even do exercise by their friends. The more they ride a bicycle, the less ill they will become, and the life span is becoming growth. As a result, riding a bicycle and walking on foot is the best approach people can participate in their society. Although some people say that buying local organic food is best, sad but true, organic material is very expensive, and the major of people cannot afford to buy them.
Another key point that makes me hold this view is that using a bicycle could establish an outstanding exercise culture so that encourages people to use bicycles increasingly. To clarify this notion, people nowadays imitate each other so as to seem to others, they will try to find models for their life since they are not innovative enough, and they are willing to have a modern and brand-new trend. This instructive behavior could be readily developed by the glamorous bicycle on which well-known people ride. Therefore, people will be stimulated to use their bicycles. This culture could incredibly be reinforced by governments if they had constructed riding rout in the streets. Although some say that people by collecting waste can contribute to the country, the minority of them are likely to contribute because they will not be inclined to exposure to the bacteria and the diseases that lay behind of dump.
To sum up, I believe that the best way in which people can participate in society is by riding a bicycle and walk on foot. This because people will be healthy and life quality will be increased and because riding a bicycle can be a style for society easily.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ion, people nowadays imitate each other so as to seem to others, they will try to find m...
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Line 3, column 913, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the diseases that lay behind of dump. To sum up, I believe that the best way i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, as to, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.4613686534 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 5.04856512141 396% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1373.03311258 156% => OK
No of words: 441.0 270.72406181 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86167800454 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62679205637 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 145.348785872 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501133786848 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 419.366225166 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1626053712 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.842105263 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2105263158 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310258573884 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112268592084 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10903556116 0.0662205650399 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218123487866 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525562017212 0.0443174109184 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ion, people nowadays imitate each other so as to seem to others, they will try to find m...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 913, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the diseases that lay behind of dump. To sum up, I believe that the best way i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, as to, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.4613686534 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 5.04856512141 396% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1373.03311258 156% => OK
No of words: 441.0 270.72406181 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86167800454 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62679205637 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 145.348785872 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501133786848 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 419.366225166 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1626053712 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.842105263 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2105263158 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310258573884 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112268592084 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10903556116 0.0662205650399 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218123487866 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525562017212 0.0443174109184 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.