Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
On temporary society, proper rules for young people serve as the catalyst for the future. however, people can't help wondering whether the rules are too strict for today's young people. From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable view that the rules are certainly too strict and young people are not supposed to always follow the rules.
To begin with, a lot of rules are not reasonable in today's society. As we all know that, people who made the rules are usually elder people. Indeed, compared with young people, they are definitely more experienced and maturer. Yet, I reckon that, with the advent of technologically advanced society, many of these rule have been out of date and old people should not blindly require young people to obey them. I can think of no better illustration than my own experience. Whenever I want to hang out, my parents would always prevent me from wearing colorful clothes, only because they think people should be modest and not to show off. however, it is every young people's nature to be well dressed up. There are still numerous of examples, such as not to use computers, not to eat ice creams and so on. I believe these kind of misunderstanding and generation gap are commonly exist in today's rules. Thus, the rules are actually too strict.
On top of that, young people should pursue for better in their own ways rather than by obeying rules. Nowadays, internet is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among young people, at the same time, it also provide us with more opportunity to learn about the society. For example, Facebook, Instagram, so many social communication applications have come into young people's life, teaching them how to get along with others. What's more, many scientific journals, such as Science and nature also have online publications. Undoubtedly, internet has become young people's unique and efficient way to promote themselves, why should we always require them to the old rules?
Admittedly, less strict rules, to some extent, have their undenied detriments. For instance, young people are not mature enough, which means they might do things rationally and result in terrible consequence. however, only by giving them freedom can they fully exploit their potential to reach their peak.
All in all, due to above mentioned reasons, I reinforce my point that young people should be free from today's strict rules. it is their own ideas and creativity that can make human's future better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, kind of, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 410.0 270.72406181 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03414634146 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58407699121 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 145.348785872 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568292682927 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 419.366225166 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4389629834 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7391304348 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8260869565 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286091512315 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857344636248 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721107561515 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162062236559 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084835151947 0.0443174109184 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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