do you agree or disagree that grades help students to work harder
No one can deny that grades could be considered as a good addition to the learning system. In my view, I agree with the idea that marks could help students for better achievement through their learning journey. I fell this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following article.
First of all, grades could encourage students for hard-working because they either want to keep the high level of grades they already get or improve these grades if it is low. For example, I can use my personal experience to explain that. In 2003, I was a student in the last year of high school. I remember that it was the year of the war in Iraq, and there are no schools for a while because of the terrible situation at that time. I kept on my study even with the sound of bombs and the fear of hazard circumstances because I used to be one of the special students in my school and all of my teachers rely on me to achieve good grades and attend a good college. Therefore, as I mentioned before, I worked seriously hard and I achieved good grades which allow me to attend dentistry college in Baghdad university (one of the most prestigious universities in Iraq).
Second, grades help teachers in specific and schools, in general, to invest their students for a bright future. In other words, it helps teachers to sort their students according to their smartness level, and meanwhile, they will give them a better chance to be a good and positive figure in the future to serve the country and the community. For instance, when I arrived in the United State in 2014, my son was 7 years old and he had to join the school as a first-grader student. After 3-4 months of the school year, I received a letter from his teacher states that my son has something special and he is eligible to attend the gifted and talented program (a special program for smart students with a high level of education and projects). These kinds of programs offered students a scholarship and a better chance to attend interesting universities like Harvard or others.
To Wrap it up, in conclusion, I can agree that grades are a reasonable addition to the education system for two reasons. the first one is, grade helps educators to work harder and achieve better results. Second, grades are a good way to invest the generations for a better future for the country and population as well by offering them an advanced learning system that accommodates their level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, first of all, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 22.412803532 228% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1373.03311258 146% => OK
No of words: 435.0 270.72406181 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61379310345 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61053082439 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 145.348785872 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 419.366225166 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0813750367 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.058823529 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5882352941 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208421685637 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776906713749 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684670113268 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139022177789 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267824575643 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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