effectiveness of tree devices
The reading and the lecture are both about a specific approach through desertification in order to prevent more lands to dry. It is mentioned in the passage that by growing trees in arid areas and providing a box to supply water for them, these lands would be retained and protected from diminishing. However, the author discusses three drawbacks regarding to this solution. On the other hand, the professor is not convinced of this and casts doubt on each of problems presented in the passage. Having categorically rejected all the problems, she explains the reasons.
To commerce, the author and the speaker put forth to the idea of the cost. In this vein, the writer disputes that each of these boxes costs 25 dollars which can be considered a striking amount of money for millions of trees, and many countries are not capable of affording this money. This specific argument is challenged by the speaker. According to the professor, when trees grow bigger these boxes can be removed and be used for even 20 times or more. Therefore, by reusing the boxes, the costs will be feasible.
Secondly, both the article and the lecture discusses the idea of the availability of local people to install and protect the devices. The article argues that local people are adversely impressed by rigorous working condition due to the desertification and are not zealous to give a hand for trees which does not provide benefit for them. Contrastly, the lecturer opposes this notion by asserting that provided the local people be rewarded in competence of looking after trees, they will be eager to help. The professor states that they can, for instance, use part of water for their cultivation purpose or use tree branches as fire wood.
Finally, the author averts that as long as trees outgrow form boxes they would not be able the survive the harsh dry condition. In contrast, the lecturer's stance is that trees can survive this environment after growing taller. She states that since that devices help them grow deeper roots in the soil, so they can take moisture from deeper parts of the soil in the absence of the device. she provides the example of Sahara desert to illuminate this notion and states that 90 percent of these trees survive 2 years after removing the boxes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tgrow form boxes they would not be able the survive the harsh dry condition. In contrast, t...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
...e harsh dry condition. In contrast, the lecturers stance is that trees can survive this e...
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Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... the soil in the absence of the device. she provides the example of Sahara desert t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 387.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86563307494 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53008129372 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 145.348785872 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529715762274 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7766990164 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.611111111 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112644533822 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333670517606 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379259386764 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708660530961 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466957055802 0.0443174109184 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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