It is better to exercise with others than doing alone
Nowadays, with the development of society, earning more incomes, people have many free times compared to in the past; thus, they usually do exercise to recuperating their physical condition. Each person has a different style; some people like exercising alone but others doing together. Hence, there is a controversy about which is more positive effects between alone and together. Be a variety of exercise styles as there may, people need to do with others because it is more efficient and improve relationships.
First of all, people can vastly improve interpersonal skills and widen their ties through doing exercise together. This is because by doing physical activities with others, people have interacted with others, and in this process, they will learn how to communicate and cooperate effectively as a team. Furthermore, these interplays help them to know each other; this makes their string firm. For instance, going to university, my timid sister took a basketball class for relieving her stress. By playing basketball with other students, she developed a sense of belonging and experience team spirit, and finally, she can get along with them. Exercising without participating in clubs, she would not make new friends.
The most important reason, besides enlarging networks, is that people can exercise more efficiently by checking each other. The main purpose of working out is to find the vitality of physical condition, the exercise plan of people who do alone usually sticks to nothing, with the development of technology, exercising with others, people usually use apps to check their daily exercise procedure. By referencing the checklist, people can give advice or get motivates from others who complete daily physical activity plans more than they do. Furthermore, team works can amplify the range of sports they can do. As for my story, for example, when I was in high school, after school, I tried to do exercise many times but the plan went out the window. One day, my classmate suggested taking part in his working out teams to me, and I accepted. Partaking in the group, I could accomplish my plans easier, and feel healthier by playing sports with them. If I did not join the club, I would not be able to improve my health and just make useless plans.
In conclusion, exercising together is more beneficial than doing alone. This is because people could be more sociable. When doing together, people can have a lot of conversation with others. In addition, people can work out more efficiently. It prevents the plan of coming to nothing and helps people to do broad exercises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 30.3222958057 218% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1373.03311258 159% => OK
No of words: 428.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10280373832 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72218622482 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 145.348785872 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530373831776 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 419.366225166 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2467634786 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9565217391 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346833440044 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105157919147 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866146822322 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24033055228 0.162205337803 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573428256843 0.0443174109184 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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