it is impossible to live in Venus' surface permanent
The reading and the lecturer are both about living in Venus' surface is possible or not. The author of the reading believes that it is not plausible for people can survive there beacause of the harsh condition on Venus. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article meaning that peresence on Venus is not without chalanges, but it is certainly possible by solving some issus in that high atmosphere.
First of all, the author claims that the pressure in Venus' surface is so high. If human land on Venus, they will be crushed completely. This point is challenge by the lecture. He says that the presure in high station will be lower than at the surface. By staying in high location this problem will be solved. In the other hand, nothing will be crushed there asa far as the presure there is equal the presure in the earth.
Secondly, the author states that on Venus' surface not only there is no water but also it is lack of the any oxygen that human need for life. In addition, it is nearly impossible to supply the requirement of water and oxygen from earth. The lecturer refuts this. She suggests the Venus' surface contains alot of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric asid. Therefore, by the use of of these marterial and chemical process, water and oxygen can be made, and human will be able to produce their needed by chemical material obtain Venus' atmosphere. So there is no need to import them from earh.
Finally, the author mentions that beacause of the thick clouds that are available around the Venus, the large amount of sunlight is not capable to reach in Venus. As a resault, it makes it impossible for human to use of solar power cells to provide their require electricity energy for their machines. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that the cloud thats exist around the Venus are not very thick and a considrable amount of sunlight can reflect to earth. Human can use this reflection and collect the sunlight which is reached to surface to generate electricity and provide their need to power.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...acause of the harsh condition on Venus. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...nd sulfuric asid. Therefore, by the use of of these marterial and chemical process, w...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...n the other hand, states that the cloud thats exist around the Venus are not very thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 359.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66573816156 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33763990615 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465181058496 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4057764631 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1578947368 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241033215634 0.272083759551 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737597499299 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753454000463 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143808793223 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442358459308 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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