The Little Ice Age
Both the lecture and the passage discusses the possible explanation for the little ice age. The passage provides three main causes of the ice age. however, the lecturer says that the causes that the passage takes to explain the ice age are outdated.
To begin, the author says that the disruption of the ocean current was responsible for the ice age. The colder glacier melted down prior to the ice age as at that time there was an unusually warm climate. Consequently, the clod melted glacier cooed down the gulf stream resulting in cold climate throughout the world at that time. however, the lecturer says that the new information suggests only the colder part of Europe and North America were possible to cool down. An explanation for the cooldown for South Africa and New Zealand was not congruous with the cause. So disruption of the ocean current cause does not hold water.
Another futile point of the passage is the volcanic eruption. it is true that volcanic eruption can cause the cooler climate as it dusts and sulfur shroud the sky. But, for this phenomenon, many of the dust and sulfur are required however the condition is not possible. If it had happened, there would have been clear cut signs such as visible colorful sunsets and gray color snow. again, the passage seems weak to define the cause of the ice age.
Lastly, the forest growth at that time for the ice age is not plausible. the forest does suck carbon dioxide from the atmosphere however the time period for the intense cooldown is not enough. The human again replicates the same population once they had. they began to clear out the land and used the land for their purpose. Therefore, the argument seems again baseless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77027027027 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29200254306 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8890665593 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3157894737 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147162871822 0.272083759551 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436238057113 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401208927925 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813893999198 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341447337418 0.0443174109184 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.3589403974 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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