The main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about changing the
The main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about changing the information record of pationts from paper form to electronic medical record. The reading claims that medical information should be changed to new system by pointing out three supporting reasons. The professor, on the other hand, repudiats whatever mentioned in the reading and provides some evidence to the contrary.
First, the reading states that by using electronic detabase, the cost will be reduced a lot. The professor, nevertheless, denies it, saying that it cannot reduces the cost because doctors who addopted to write on the paper, they do not change this attitude, and they will continue writing prescription on th papar. In addition she mentions that doctors also save the papers as a backup, besides, the papers maybe needed in the future because the doctor's signiture is on the paper and they have to keep it for some sort of ligacy situation.
Second, the passage discusses that the change can reduce the mistakes producing because of a bad handwriting. However, the professor rejects the author's view and illustrates the idea that this change will not eliminate the mistakes made by illegible handwriting. She menstions that doctors who used to writing on the paper, still use this procudure when the visiting a patient. And latter, the staffs who enter the information from the paper to the computer can have some problem with reading the handwriting and type false information.
Third, the author claims that this change can help the researches to have access to the database easily. On the contrary, the lecturer disagrees with this idea, by clarifying that this change will not nesserily effect the research procudure. She states that researchers still find difficult to access the database becuase of the privacy law. Acording to this law, all the medical information have to be private and all researches need to follow this rule. If they want to have access to some detabase, they should get permision from the patients, moreover, they have to do a lot of paper work first.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... pointing out three supporting reasons. The professor, on the other hand, repudiats...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ue writing prescription on th papar. In addition she mentions that doctors also save the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, third, in addition, sort of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 343.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06413994169 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60847095671 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501457725948 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7736451157 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18526605344 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702092349414 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125267001626 0.0662205650399 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128576246353 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112708859984 0.0443174109184 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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