The main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about changing the
e main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about changing the information record of patients from paper form to electronic medical record. The reading claims that medical information should be changed to a new system by pointing out three supporting reasons. The professor, on the other hand, repudiates whatever mentioned in the reading and provides some evidence to the contrary.
First, the reading states that by using an electronic database, the cost will be reduced a lot. The professor, nevertheless, denies it, saying that it cannot reduce the cost because doctors who adopted to write on the paper, they do not change this attitude, and they will continue prescribing the paper. In addition, she mentions that doctors also save the papers as a backup, besides, the papers may be needed in the future because the doctor's signature is on the paper and they have to keep it for some ligacy situation.
Second, the passage discusses that the change can reduce the mistakes producing because of bad handwriting. However, the professor rejects the author's view and illustrates the idea that this change will not eliminate the mistakes made by illegible handwriting. She mentions that doctors who used to writing on the paper, still use this procedure when they are visiting a patient. Also, latter, the staffs who enter the information from the paper to the computer can have some problem with reading the handwriting and type false information.
Third, the author claims that this change can help the researches to have access to the database easily. On the contrary, the lecturer disagrees with this idea, by clarifying that this change will not necessarily affect the research procedure. She states that researchers still find it difficult to access the database because of the privacy law. According to this law, all the medical information have to be private, and all researches need to follow this rule. If they want to have access to some database, they should get permission from the patients; moreover, they have to do much paperwork first.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: E
e main idea of both the passage and the l...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...may be needed in the future because the doctors signature is on the paper and they have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, third, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 340.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63519563892 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4065907236 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181433142996 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702962366256 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125244036405 0.0662205650399 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128117946073 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11292856012 0.0443174109184 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 63.6247240618 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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