Many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks, instead of
starting a new business, however, one can buy a franchise. A franchise is a license
issued by a large, usually well-known, company to a small business owner. Under the
license, the owner acquires the right to use the company's brand name and agrees to sell
its products. In return, the franchising company receives a percent of the sales.
A franchise businesses problem for first-time business owners is finding reliable suppliers of the goods
and services they need: equipment, raw materials, maintenance, etc. It is easy to choose
the wrong supplier, and doing so can be costly. Buying a franchise eliminates much of
this problem. Most franchising companies have already found reliable suppliers, and
franchise contracts typically specify which suppliers are to be used. is challenged protects
franchise owners from the risk of serious losses.
Another advantage of a franchise is that it can save a new business a lot of money on
advertising. Advertising one's product to potential customers is a crucial factor in a
business's success. A franchise owner, however, sells an already the and recognized
brand and also gets the benefit of sophisticated and expensive advertising paid by the
parent company.
Finally, a franchise offers more security than starting an independent (non-franchise)
business. The failure rate for starting independent businesses is very high during the
first few years; the failure rate for starting franchises is much lower. Finding one's own
way in today's competitive business environment is difficult, and buying a franchise
allows an inexperienced business owner to use a proven business model.
The reading passage states that to buy a franchise has many benefits to the one. First, it provide the owner with reliable suppliers, second, provide high quality and modern addvertisments, and high security to avoid failure if you start independent business. However, the speaker has a negative opinion about what the author mentions.
First, although the francise owner will get benefit for getting spliers from a trustworthy supplier, the speaker points out that the franchaise companies force the owner to buy specific goods which are overpriced, even if the owner finds the same product with lower price, it is not allowed to buy it.
Second, according to the reading passage that franchise companies will provide the franchise owner with sofisticated adds paid from the parent company. On the other hand, the lecturer states that the franchise owner to get those high quality adds, he must pay to the franchise company 6% of his sales, which is considered little benefits.
Third, according to the reading passage, to start franchise business is less risk than start an independent one. However, the speaker opposes, as he sees that risk could be more less if this individual buy a previous product, it will be success twice as franchise. Therefore, based on what the speaker explains, the writer's point of view doesn't hold water.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...has many benefits to the one. First, it provide the owner with reliable suppliers, seco...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
... opposes, as he sees that risk could be more less if this individual buy a previous produ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ker explains, the writers point of view doesnt hold water.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14611872146 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60152178505 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570776255708 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8859357045 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.222222222 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19316646876 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835667057961 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717649973822 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112615070384 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290334479084 0.0443174109184 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.