Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible.
The reading passage and the listening passage most certainly disagree on the topic about the possibility of maintaining human presence in Venus.
First at all, the reading passage points out that atmospheric pressure at Venus surface is 90 times greater than atmospheric pressure in Earths' surface. Anything human might will be crushed on Venus surface. However, the professor explains that landing in Venus would be certainly possible. Creating a floating station located high 50 kilometers above Venus atmosphere where the pressure is lower would solve the problem. There is not danger for a spacecraf to land.
Second, the reading passage states that there are not reservoirs of water in Venus surface and the planet atmosphere are lack of oxygen or water vapor. On the other hand, the speaker explains that Venus atmosphere contains many carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. Those components could be used as part of some chemical process to produce water and oxygen on the station. As a result, water and oxygen are not necessarily to be imported to the station.
Finally, the article discusses how on Venus atmosphere just a very little sunlight reach the planet surface due to the thick clouds that fill the atmosphere. The professor points out that it is true, that clouds are still on the atmosphere 50 kilometers above Venus surface but they are not very thick. The clouds reflects the sun light and these reflects and the solar panel as well can be used to produce more energy to the station.
In sum, by giving all these three reasons, the listening goes against to the reading passage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n located high 50 kilometers above Venus atmosphere where the pressure is lower w...
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...us surface and the planet atmosphere are lack of oxygen or water vapor. On the ot...
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...explains that Venus atmosphere contains many carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. Those components cou...
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...eflects the sun light and these reflects and the solar panel as well can be used ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, second, so, still, well, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02255639098 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47843317716 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5095039346 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192550724973 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698055389083 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669928089373 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100326845428 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073716024134 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.