Parents are the best teachers.
Parents are critically important in the upbringing of children in any family. I agree with the idea that parents are the best teacher. I will explain in the following essay.
To start with, Parents are the first role models for most children. Since childhood, parents are the ones that are modeling for children. For example, studies have proven that the way we learn our language is by imitation. And, who do we imitate? our parents. They cannot be replaced by any. Moreover, children are prompt to be more successful at school when parents start teaching them how to read and do the math before they start school. On the contrary, children who are neglected by parents and do not pay attention to their children education are bound to fail at school
Second, parents' support is needed throughout their children’s entire school life. As a school teacher, I have witnessed in some parents, that are in the believed that children should be responsible for themselves, so they leave children on their own when they hit middle school. I found this to be a mistake. Teachers do not replace parents. Instead, parents who are concern and keep tabs on their children, even through high school tend to be better students.
Lastly, children take up sports in the same field as parents. When parents have their young children to do sports with them, or watch games together, these are activities bond the relationship parent-child; these customs stay with them for life. For example, I remember going to soccer games and playing soccer with my dad when I was just a little boy. This love for the game and the sport stayed with me throughout my life, to the point that I became a professional soccer player back in the 1990s.
By way of conclusion, I am in the opinion that parents that are involved in their children education are the best teacher, for the reason I explained above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, for example, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80307692308 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57934260695 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516923076923 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.0560029328 49.2860985944 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1578947368 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168027036716 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061759851037 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836776077726 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137142258034 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788555094916 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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