solutions to prevent fungus spread to bat population
The listening lecture totally opposes to the reading passage in the solutions to stop the deadly fungus from spreading in bat population. To begin with, the reading says that people should stop visiting the cave because people can carry these fungus on their clothes and spread it to the bats. However, the listening argues that this solution is not going to work. Bats always carry fungus from caves to caves, so even though human stop visiting these caves, fungus will still spread between bats and bats. Besides, some cave that people never visit before also g=have infected bats. Therefore, it is unlikely that the spread of fungus is cause by people.
Secondly, the reading suggests that people can study the European bats because they are resistant to such fungus. Nevertheless, the listening implies that it is true that studying these European bats can be helpful, but it will take decades to study them and figure out a solution. Researchers predict that these bats will die in about 10 years. As a result, this solution will not be helpful because it is time-consuming.
Lastly, the reading asserts that heating the cave is a good method because high temperature can kill these fungus. Likewise, the listening is not convinced by this method. It is true that fungus will die in a high temperature environment. However, the bats will wake up when the temperature rise because they think the summer is here. When they wake up, they can have trouble trying to find food and eventually, they will die. In other words, heating the cave will not only kill the fungus, but also the bats. Therefore, this solution is not likely to solve the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fungus' or 'these fungi', 'these funguses'?
Suggestion: this fungus; these fungi; these funguses
...iting the cave because people can carry these fungus on their clothes and spread it to the b...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fungus' or 'these fungi', 'these funguses'?
Suggestion: this fungus; these fungi; these funguses
...ethod because high temperature can kill these fungus. Likewise, the listening is not convinc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, lastly, likewise, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as a result, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87943262411 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39513742099 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3416580987 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9411764706 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261335050435 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950788371312 0.0996497079465 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794528637373 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183754741496 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866482245832 0.0443174109184 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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