TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task
the reading and the lecture is about dinosaur. the author of reading states that dinosaurs are endotherms and provide some evidenaces to support this idea.the lecturer, on the contrary, refutes all of the evidences and stats that dinosaurs are not endotherms.
first, the reading states that finding the dinosaur fossils in polar regions is one reson that these animals are endotherm. the professor, in contrast, points out that the climate of polar region in the past was warmer than today and in the cold season the dinosaur migrated or hibernated in this area. finiding these fossils would not prove that dinosaurs are cool-blooded animal.
secondly, the passage says that the position and movement of the legs of dinosaurs are similar to the legs of modern endotherms animals; therefore, dinosaurs are endotherms. the lecturer, on the other hand, averts thats having this feature is not neccessarily and feature of endotherm animals. moreover, he says that position of legs is just for the supporting of the weight and help them grow to very large.
last but not the least, the reading asserts that the bones of endotherm usualy include structure called harverisan canal. furthermore, dinasurs have this feature. the professor, on the other hand, says that this is true that dinasurs have this feature but also the have growth canal that indicate the time they did not growth and stop growing. therefore, dinasurs are not endotherms.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the reading and the lecture is about dinosa...
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...ding and the lecture is about dinosaur. the author of reading states that dinosaurs...
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....the lecturer, on the contrary, refutes all of the evidences and stats that dinosaurs are ...
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...s that dinosaurs are not endotherms. first, the reading states that finding the di...
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...reson that these animals are endotherm. the professor, in contrast, points out that...
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...ur migrated or hibernated in this area. finiding these fossils would not prove that dino...
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...t dinosaurs are cool-blooded animal. secondly, the passage says that the position and...
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...s; therefore, dinosaurs are endotherms. the lecturer, on the other hand, averts tha...
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...the lecturer, on the other hand, averts thats having this feature is not neccessarily...
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...arily and feature of endotherm animals. moreover, he says that position of legs is just ...
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...ht and help them grow to very large. last but not the least, the reading asserts ...
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...lude structure called harverisan canal. furthermore, dinasurs have this feature. the profes...
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...urthermore, dinasurs have this feature. the professor, on the other hand, says that...
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...e they did not growth and stop growing. therefore, dinasurs are not endotherms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18376068376 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57444140684 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508547008547 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6133940767 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06452816374 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335859670674 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120335308693 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792800961978 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194380733931 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442666573953 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.