TPO 15,Cane toads
The passage is about cane toad amphibians inhabitinged in Central and South aAmerica. they were transported to aAustraliao to help agricuolture, but uonfortunatelly affected the Australian ecosystem. The author offers several solutions to control/for controlling/ the population of these animals in Australia. yet the speaker is skepticalk about theseis ideas and thinks that they are not efficient enough.
The first solution given by the author is to build a national fence. they will prevent this species to spread in the rest part of the country where they have not inhabieted yet. However, the proffessor thinks that the rivetrs and floating waters will carry out the toad's eggs. thus these feancies will be inefficient.
The second approach to reduce /meothod of diminishing / the quantity of this amphibians is human resourcies. volunteers can easily capture this animal by simple tools and kill them. Along with this, toads' eggs are very easy to destroy which is also an effective method to decriease their population. In contrast, the speaker thinks that volunteers are an uncontrolled power, and that process can cause other bad effects. For example, they can catch other amnphibians as well which are really important for the caountry nature.
The final strategy of the control over the toad population control is related to a disease-caousing virus. The scholars are involved in research where they are trying to develope a visrus which will infect this species and have a minimal effect on ?the other?. The author thinks that it is a good way to fight with this against these animals. Nonetheless, the proffessor totally refutes this method because they can affect aamerican frogs as well. it is known that these amphibians are being transferred by the animal lowers, and it is highly probabple that the transferred ones will infect the aamerican population. thus, theseis viruses are daengerous for the aamerican population as well.
In conclusion, it has to be noted that /it is eviodent that/ there is a contraudiction between the ideas presented by the author and the speaker. The author lists several solutions and believes that they are efficient. On the other hand, the professor hasve a different opinion about these ideas and castsd doubt on their success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...bitinged in Central and South aAmerica. they were transported to aAustraliao to help...
^^^^
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
...pulation of these animals in Australia. yet the speaker is skepticalk about theseis...
^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...he author is to build a national fence. they will prevent this species to spread in ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...g waters will carry out the toads eggs. thus these feancies will be inefficient. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...g waters will carry out the toads eggs. thus these feancies will be inefficient. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...eothod of diminishing / the quantity of this amphibians is human resourcies. volunte...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Volunteers
...of this amphibians is human resourcies. volunteers can easily capture this animal by simpl...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...control over the toad population control is related to a disease-caousing virus. ...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d have a minimal effect on ?the other?. The author thinks that it is a good way to ...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or thinks that it is a good way to fight with this against these animals. Nonethe...
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Line 7, column 451, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hey can affect aamerican frogs as well. it is known that these amphibians are bein...
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Line 7, column 620, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...s will infect the aamerican population. thus, theseis viruses are daengerous for the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nonetheless, really, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1373.03311258 141% => OK
No of words: 366.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27322404372 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.825766788 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 145.348785872 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6320703852 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293201059577 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775605146661 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602595271413 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158387970782 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738533615516 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 63.6247240618 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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