tpo 2

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tpo 2

The article states that the best way to approach certain new project is by having a team works on it and provides three advantages for team’s work over individual. However, the professor contends that there are many negativities for working in a team, by giving an example of one new project for one company, that’s given to a team to work on. This example refutes what the Author mentions in the article.

First, the reading posits that a group of people will have better knowledge and experience than an individual. The professor opposes this point by saying that the company has a shocking finding after 6 months from assign the project to the team. They found that some of the members didn’t work well and most of the work given to the others, who don’t recognize by name because they all work to the one team. According to the professor, the ones who work hard doesn’t prefer the team work but they do prefer the individual one.

Second, the article claims that the group can work more quickly than an individual. In the other hand, the professor explains that the same company found that the project doesn’t go as fast as it should be because the team meets many times until they agree on how to start the project. This information challenges what the article mentions.

Third, the reading asserts that taking part in a group process can be very rewarding for members of the team. The professor refutes this point by telling us about how the group team works. He explains that some of the members are more influence than others and that’s how some ideas dropped and other ideas get more attention to it. According to the professor if one of the idea fail the entire team got the blame even if some members didn’t agree on it from the beginning.

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Sentence: The professor opposes this point by saying that the company has a shocking finding after 6 months from assign the project to the team.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to from and assign

most of the work given to the others
most of the works are given to the others

In the other hand,
On the other hand,

some of the members are more influence than others
some of the members are more influenced than others

if one of the idea fail
if one of the ideas fails

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

No. of Words: 318 250
Around 250 words wanted

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 318 250
No. of Characters: 1407 1200
No. of Different Words: 144 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.425 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.229 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.137 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4