TPO-23
the author explains that in last years one species of tree in northwestern America, who called yellow cedar, have been decreased for three reasons. However, the lecturer thinks that these hypothesizes are not adequate.
First, the reading says that bark beetles attack cedar and breed their child which feed on the wood. Conversely, listening says since that healthy cedar trees have power chemical substance and poison, insects such as bark beetle can not attack them. Actually, they attack just damage trees.
Also, bears eat sugars contained in cedar. As a matter of fact, bears' clawing unlikely to destroy trees by itself, it makes weak these trees. the lestining passage, in contrast, says that cedar trees exist in two island which any bear live there. It is observd that, in these areas still declining of cedar is continuing.
Finally, although the reading asserts that changing the pattern of seasonal in North America causes the sensetive roots damage in cold weather, especially on cold winter night. Therefore, the populations of them have been declining. The lecture has oppose idea. it asserts that the roots of cedar trees are more sensetive to hot temperature and low elevation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the author explains that in last years one ...
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...estern America, who called yellow cedar, have been decreased for three reasons. H...
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...s by itself, it makes weak these trees. the lestining passage, in contrast, says th...
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...em have been declining. The lecture has oppose idea. it asserts that the roots of ceda...
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...declining. The lecture has oppose idea. it asserts that the roots of cedar trees a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, conversely, finally, first, however, so, still, therefore, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 194.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17525773196 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39195253341 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.540411800872 124% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9005061232 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443217427767 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13140148584 0.0996497079465 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699059540837 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237305112174 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00728063740797 0.0443174109184 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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