tpo 27
Little ice age
The listening and the reading materials have a debate on what caused Little ice age. The penman puts forward 3 main hypothesis, which are refuted by the following orator.
First of all, the writer suggests that changing ocean currents by melting the snows before ice age produced huge amount of fresh water into the Gulf Stream. On the contrary, the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle. According to him, this phenomenon had been occurred in Europe and North America. Furthermore, this theory can not proof the ice age happening because it can not describe South Africa and Newseland Little ice age.
The second point offered by the author is that volcanic activities during that time produced plume of dust and other chemicals which prevent reaching sunlight to the Earth and mitigate the temperature. On the other hand, the lecturer casts doubt on this assumption by saying that since there was no observation of colorful sun set or different color of snow during that period, amount of such dust was not enough to cause that reduction in temperature.
Last but not least, the reading passage proposes that declining in the human's population caused not cutting trees and addition in trees' number consumed CO2 content of air which is one of important composition for Greenhouse effect. Thus, it caused to reduce in temperature. However, the professor holds a different perspective. He explains that short time and temporary reduction of human 's low population was not sufficient reason to happen that events for long term global cooling.
In all, the ideas mentioned in the speech counter the opinions in the text.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hypothesis' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hypotheses', 'hypothesises'.
Suggestion: hypotheses; hypothesises
...ice age. The penman puts forward 3 main hypothesis, which are refuted by the following ora...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the Earth and mitigate the temperature. On the other hand, the lecturer casts do...
^^
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... passage proposes that declining in the humans population caused not cutting trees and...
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Line 13, column 249, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
... for Greenhouse effect. Thus, it caused to reduce in temperature. However, the professor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1037037037 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56033905505 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6223126616 49.2860985944 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35401671503 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959379727085 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087397398257 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148219203465 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086429772212 0.0443174109184 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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