TPO 28
The article states that when a arctic explorer, named Peary, claimed he reached pole in 1909, he became a celembrity. The reading provide three reason to support his claim. In the listening the professor explans that the reasons are not authentic enough to support Peary's claim, and she refuses each of them.
First, the text claims that after investigation of Peary's records and equipments, the national Georgraphi committee concluded that his claim is true. On the contrary, the professor says that the committee were not objective, and they were Peary's freands. in additon, they did not reaserch on the claim carefully, so their report could not be authentic.
Second, article menions that some skeptics sayed that it was impossible for peary to reach north pole in 37 days. But evidence on another explorer named Avery shows that he achieve that less than 37 days with the same trek, so they conclude that peary's claime is not impossible any more. On the other hand, the professor states that Avery's speed was different because he did not cary food, and he got it frome air plane, so it is not proper to campare Avery with peary.
Third, the reading asserts that there are some photographs that diclear Peary was in that pole. Angle of sun in the photo dimonstraits that the photose are taken in the north pole. on the contrary, the professor says that the photos are widout shaddow, and they are taken with a low qulity camera, so they can not be a prove for peary's claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The article states that when a arctic explorer, named Peary, claimed h...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...09, he became a celembrity. The reading provide three reason to support his claim. In t...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...bjective, and they were Pearys freands. in additon, they did not reaserch on the c...
^^
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skeptics'' or 'skeptic's'?
Suggestion: skeptics'; skeptic's
...c. Second, article menions that some skeptics sayed that it was impossible for peary ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...he photose are taken in the north pole. on the contrary, the professor says that t...
^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...a low qulity camera, so they can not be a prove for pearys claim.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, third, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7859922179 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36012025178 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9153498636 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417241445346 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161017507159 0.0996497079465 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777326798081 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253134489189 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398627729439 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.