Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Throughout the history, in all civilized societies, the issue of people's happiness engendered copious controversies among people. Some incline toward the opinion that it is vital for students to make many new friends easily. Some others, however, may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that the ability to preserve your friendships is more essential. As far as I am concerned, the skill that help people to maintain your old friends is more important. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point is that by keeping your old friends people can understand their friend better. Nowadays, the development of the technology happen at a very fast pace and because of its impact, it is an ardouos task to find a great friend. Many people are hard to understand them. But old friend are familiar with each other atitude and they can help each other better. For example, many years ago my cousin and his highschool friend pass the university exam and attending in the same university. Because of the time they spend with each other in the pass, they were familiar with each other behaviour and habits. When my cousin become upset, he lies down on his bed and listens to music and since his friend know that he always tries to cheer him up. Hence, my cousin always could rely on his friend.
The second significant reason supporting my idea is that people can trust to their old friend. There is a quate that say old friends are the best friends in the world. When a person meet up with a new person he cannot trust him because he do not know anything about him. On the other hands, an old friend are trustworthy. For instance, one of my old friend have a problem in school. His parent wanted to get divorce and he was upset because of that. He needed someone who trust and talk about it and he always talk to me and I try to comfort him. One of the reasons he talked to me was that I did not tell anybody else and I keep his secret.
to make a long story short, based on the aforementioned argument, old friends are more crucial that new friends since they know each other profoundly and they are royal and trustworthy. Consequently, it is highly recommended that, people keep their touch with their old friend because they are like a dimond which valued a lot. In fact, there are myriad of other reasons, challenging the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...w person he cannot trust him because he do not know anything about him. On the oth...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'talks'.
Suggestion: talks
...o trust and talk about it and he always talk to me and I try to comfort him. One of ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ll anybody else and I keep his secret. to make a long story short, based on the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61958997722 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4858710547 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503416856492 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4670964495 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2916666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219307930875 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629112937733 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423787287477 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14346007411 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525990509134 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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