TPO-3: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage.
Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt. First, there is something inconsistent about the way the woman inthe portrait is dressed. She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. Rembrandt, who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency. Second, Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not fit together. The face appears to be illuminated by light reflected onto it from below. But below the face is the dark fur collar, which would absorb light rather than reflect it. So the face should appear partially in shadow-which is not how it appears. Rembrandt would never have made such an error. Finally, examination of the back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together. Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from several pieces of wood. For these reasons the painting was removed from the official catalog of Rembrandt’s paintings in the 1930s.
The passages casts doubts on the painter of potarait of an 'Elederly woman'. however, the lecturer states the rembrandt is the true painter of the painting.
Firstly, the author states that inconsistency in the cloths of painted lady is not expected from the great painters such as Rembrants. As a counter argument to this point, the speaker praposes that the collar was added around 100 years after the original painting was made. this was done to give more sophestication to the lady in painting, thus can result in adding more value to painting.
Secondly, the writer in the passage sugggest that imperfect use of light and shadow raises question for painting to be original work of rembrandt. The speaker again stands in firm opposition of this claim. he states that, addition of color to fur collor has led to inconsistency of light and shadow in the painting. If we remove the this additional color, the painting would refelect the perfect combination of light and color.
Finally, the argument presented by writer about use multiple glued wood instead of a single wood as it was characteristics of rembrandt's other works has only scratched surface of the point. The speaker, however, presents the detailed discussion regarding this. he posits that the peice was added later on to give the painting grand look. this was all done to increase the market value of the painting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The passages casts doubts on the painter of potarait of an...
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...s after the original painting was made. this was done to give more sophestication to...
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...tands in firm opposition of this claim. he states that, addition of color to fur c...
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...nd shadow in the painting. If we remove the this additional color, the painting would re...
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...ter on to give the painting grand look. this was all done to increase the market val...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0474137931 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65461256973 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7396876467 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109396898864 0.272083759551 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039094377639 0.0996497079465 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362761805238 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716508454017 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264897273423 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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