TPO 31- the Integrated task
In the reading section, the author claims that the scientists find the fossil of a dinosaur in the volcanic ashes. Based on the evidence they find in this fossil, they state that this kind of dinosaur might not have the feather. However, the lecturer casts doubts on the reading points by presenting three reasons and examples.
First, the writer mentions that there is some decomposition of the skin of dinosaur in the fossils that might misinterpret to the feather. But, the professor demonstrates that there is not fiber evidence in other fossils that the scientists discover in the same site. Also, she adds that the volcanic ashes preserve the decomposition of the animal's skin in the fossils. Therefore, the evidence of fibers represents the dinosaur had the feather.
Secondly, the reading part mentions that there is some frills structure in dinosaur body that might mistakenly become interpreted as a feather structure because they are both grow from the same body part. Conversely, the professor explains that the remaining of the frill structure does not have specific protein named Beta Carotene; but, the response of the analyses on the remaining that the fossils contained represent a high volume of Beta carotene protein. Therefore, the remaining attributed to the feather that has the specific protein in its structure.
Finally, the author claims that if the fossils line represents the evidence of the feather in this dinosaur, it would be a useless structure in this animal. Because the animal could not use this structure for adjusting the temperature or flying. However, the professor rejects this notion by stating that there are many kinds of animals that have feather and use them for other functions. For instance, the birds that named Bicol uses its colorful feather for attracting the mate and displaying. Furthermore, based on the latest analyses of scientists the feathers of this dinosaur were orange and white to attract the mate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some frills'?
Suggestion: there are some frills
...econdly, the reading part mentions that there is some frills structure in dinosaur body that might m...
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Line 8, column 348, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'feathered'.
Suggestion: feathered
...ere are many kinds of animals that have feather and use them for other functions. For i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 319.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18495297806 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65028066037 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457680250784 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5716286008 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367234830793 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124392443001 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713555401656 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213350043554 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442606954877 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.