TPO-31 - Integrated Writing Task A fossil skeleton of a dinosaur called Sinosauropteryx, preserved in volcanic ash, was discovered in Liaoning, China, in 1996. Interestingly, the fossil included a pattern of fine lines surrounding the skeletal bones. Some
a fossil skelton of dianasur called Sinaosaurpterys inclide a pattern of line surrounding the skeltone bones. Although Some palentologists interpret the line as evidence that Sinaosaurpterys had feathers. The reading claims that critics have oppesed idea for sevral reason that Sinosauropteryx was a feathered dinosaur. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
The author argues that the fine line may formed after animal death. Its skin may have decomposed into fibres. The skin fibers then became preserved as lines in the fossil; the line misinterpreted as evidence of feather. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that if these lines are due to the decomposition of the skin why there wasn’t on the other animal that was discovered on the same site.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that the line surrounding the skelton are much likely to be fossiles ramains of frills than remanins of feathers. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that frill and feather are compeletly different in chemical material. Feather are made up a proteain that contain beta-cratin while frilles do not contain any beta-cratin. The studies show that the sign of these proteoin in fossils.
Finally, the reading asserts that feathers are basically used in bird for flying and regulate their internal temprature. but these lines were located where that it seems they are useless. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that feathers are not only used for regulate their internal temprature or fly, in some birds like pitch-hog has long feather in its tail to attract a mate matting. Survey show that Sinosauropteryx had colorful feather like orange or red that assumed feathers were used for display.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
a fossil skelton of dianasur called Sinao...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...and regulate their internal temprature. but these lines were located where that it ...
^^^
Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'feathered'.
Suggestion: feathered
..., in some birds like pitch-hog has long feather in its tail to attract a mate matting. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23448275862 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8427683247 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4917574952 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420754712739 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131962843483 0.0996497079465 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867490155628 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237027578734 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875747302049 0.0443174109184 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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