The passage and lecture mainly talk about the possibility that dinosaurs are Endotherms. The author lists evidence of dinosaurs' living environment, the physiological structure, and the bone structure of dinosaurs. While the professor states other reasons to argue it.
To begin with, the passage indicates that some dinosaursdinosaurs’ bones exist in Polar Regions, which is so cold for dinosaurs that they must be the endotherms for activity. However, the lecture claims that in the period of dinosaurs living, the Polar Region in fact was not so cold as the passage said. Evidence indicates some other modern reptiles also live in this area. So, even if dinosaurs are not endotherms, their fossils also could be found there.
Furthermore, the passage indicates the dinosaurs have the legs underneath their bodies, which may mean dinosaurs are endotherms. On the contrary, the lecture argues that reason why dinosaurs have such physiological structure is that they need grow large; the legs are evolved to the stain their weight.
Besides, though the passage states that the dense Haversian canals found on the dinosaurs' bones indicates they belongs to endotherms, the lecture also give an objectiveopposite evidence of growthing ring, which means the dinosaurs cannot grow very fast. The Haversian canals, means the creature grow fast, is a character only exist on endotherms. However, the growth ring means dinosaurs, like other modern reptiles, have a period that grow relatively slowly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e, and the bone structure of dinosaurs. While the professor states other reasons to a...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...d on the dinosaurs bones indicates they belongs to endotherms, the lecture also give an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47210300429 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98813558932 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527896995708 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5404831257 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.8541721854 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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