TPO 63 Cheatgrass
The reading passage and the lecture, both of them are showing about the defense mechanism of golden frogs. In the reading passage, three ways are mentioned to protect the golden from getting infected by the fungus. but all of the methods have their limitations.
Firstly, the reading passage suggests that introducing a bacteria that produces some chemical can be used to protect the golden from infection. but the bacteria can't protect the golden frog for a long time. It secret chemical initially but with time they stop producing that chemical. Early time of colonization is helpful for protecting the golden frog, but as time goes chemicals won't produce and the bacteria would not be able to save the golden frog.
Secondly, the breeding of golden frogs in captivity may not be successful because there is a possibility of another infected animal. From the infected animals that live in that captivate areas, the golden frog can be affected.
Thirdly, they are supposed to protect themselves by increasing their body temperature. but heating up their bodies will weaken them because heating up requires more energy. Then the golden frog will die from another disease.
Finally, the ways mentioned in the passage are not effective to overcome the problems of the population of golden frogs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...en from getting infected by the fungus. but all of the methods have their limitatio...
^^^
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rom getting infected by the fungus. but all of the methods have their limitations. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bacterium' or simply 'bacteria'?
Suggestion: a bacterium; bacteria
...ading passage suggests that introducing a bacteria that produces some chemical can be used...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...d to protect the golden from infection. but the bacteria cant protect the golden fr...
^^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...golden from infection. but the bacteria cant protect the golden frog for a long time...
^^^^
Line 13, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...s by increasing their body temperature. but heating up their bodies will weaken the...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55917854055 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9046037214 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2307692308 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0532678738108 0.272083759551 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234253825322 0.0996497079465 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0122604590879 0.0662205650399 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0301128842269 0.162205337803 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146822694075 0.0443174109184 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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