tpo-extra 1-integrated
Both the reading and listening parts offer two opposite views about the benefits of buying a franchise for starting a novel business. Whereas the passage lists three advantages of purchasing the franchise; the professor, on the other hand, refutes these advantages. Indeed, she refers to a recently conducted research to call those advantage into the questions.
First of all, the article mentioned the reliable supply of goods and services as the first positive aspect of franchising; in contrast, the instructor casts doubt on the accuracy of this aspect. As she describes, according to the previously mentioned study, the owner of the company forces the branches to buy a specific brand of goods and services which are expensive. In fact, there are identical types of goods and services in the market which cost fewer than those accomplished ones. Therefore, the recommended goods or services are not reliable and cheaper for franchised companies.
Secondly, meanwhile, the text stated that franchise saves money on advertising and consider it as another benefit of franchising; the lecturer, on the contrary, disapproves this benefit too. According to her assertation, each franchised company should pay six percent of its annual total sum in sell to the company owner. This payment is done for the sake of advertising; however, these ads are not for that specific company; is for brands and many companies of those brands in many places. Besides, as a company only spends half of the above-mentioned cost to its own business, can make more profit. Thus, the franchised company does not save money on advertising.
Finally, although the passage asserted that the franchising is a secure way of starting a business; the professor rejects this advantage too. Based on her discerption, while the franchising is less risky, it is not secure. As she discusses, the most secure method of starting a novel business is buying an existed company from its previous company. This type of business possesses two times more chance of success in the comparison of buying the franchised branches. Consequently, buying a franchised company does not warranty success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Both the reading and listening parts off...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recently conducted research'.
Suggestion: recently conducted research
...these advantages. Indeed, she refers to a recently conducted research to call those advantage into the questi...
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Suggestion:
...l those advantage into the questions. First of all, the article mentioned the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and cheaper for franchised companies. Secondly, meanwhile, the text stated tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y does not save money on advertising. Finally, although the passage asserted t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in contrast, in fact, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28115942029 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88951635536 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0140203602 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.176470588 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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