TPO18
The lecture and the article are both about the Torreya toxifoha tree extinction. The author feels that humans can prevent extinction of these trees and provides three solution to address the decline of Torreya. The lecturer challenges the claim made by the article. He believes that these solutions are not convincing.
To begin with, the writer states that reestablishing Torreya in the same location would be very practical to survive the tree. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer, he claims that coolest and dampest areas are infleunced by the environment temperature. Global warming affects the microclimates that faced with dryness.
Secondly, the author mentions that relocating the Torreya is very effective way. The lecture, however, rebuts this by mentioning that this solution make the condition wors. she says that when people relocate the other trees like Bleck locas, the thriving groth of Black locas threated another the growth of other tree species and made them extinct.
Last but not least, the article posits that another option is to preserve Torreya in research centers. In contrast, the lecturer position is that trees in research ceners are very susceptible to diseas and they do not have any chance to survive in research invironments. they should be varied genetically in order to be resistant to different types of viruses and bacterias to can be survive. Therefore in the isulate invironment they can not be survive in the long time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tion to address the decline of Torreya. The lecturer challenges the claim made by t...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... this solution make the condition wors. she says that when people relocate the othe...
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Line 13, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ce to survive in research invironments. they should be varied genetically in order t...
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Line 13, column 394, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...iruses and bacterias to can be survive. Therefore in the isulate invironment they can not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26890756303 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67348421178 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1995298614 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312023737419 0.272083759551 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979340006401 0.0996497079465 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708319847329 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172978749948 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353793191719 0.0443174109184 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.