TPO55
while the reading passage states that, using box-shaped will not be succesful, the professor in the lecture says that, these reasons are not convinced, and she puts some reasons to support her position.
First, considering the reading passage, the cost of box-shaped device is too much for million of trees. In contrast, the professor in the lecture rejects this idea, and she further explains that, when trees grow and device remove, after years the cost of trees will become more than before, so they can make up the cost.
Second, the reading passage claims that, this project causes that people cna not use trees for food. On the contrary, the professor in the lecture refuses this point, and she makes point that, althought at first local people can not use trees for food, after a while they can collect water for other plants like vegetable, so if a lot of vegetable grow, they will have more food in the futur. In addition, when trees gorw, they have more food and more fire wood, so this plan has more benefit for them.
Third, the reading passage states that, by using the device, the ability of collection and conserve water will become decrease. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture says that, by growing more trees, their roots will become long too that they can sonserve water, so trees can survive in soil and dry deserts. For instance, in Sahaea desert 90% trees survive for years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
while the reading passage states that, using ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...st of box-shaped device is too much for million of trees. In contrast, the professor in...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82520325203 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11083278446 2.5805825403 82% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 2.5761589404 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5186270446 49.2860985944 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.888888889 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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