TPO42
While the reading passage gives some solutions to prevent injuries to birds when they are flying, the professor says that, these solutions are not effectively.
First, considering the reading passage, if clear glass replace with one-way glass, birds will not fly through it. In contract, the professor in the lecture rejects this idea, and he further explains that, in this case glass is seen just like mirror, and birds can not recognize. Actually, when it reflects sky or trees, birds think is the sky or trees, so fly though it.
Second, the reading passage states that, by paiting colorful lines or designs window glass, birds will not injured. In contrary, the professor in the lecture refuses the idea, and he makes point that, by designing window glass, people who are inside the home can see outside, but birds can not see inside the home, and inside the home seem dark, so birds fly through it and injured.
Third, the writer in the article puts follow, creating an artifical magnetic help birds navigate in the right direction when they are flying. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture explains that, birds have ability to sense Earth's magnetic field, but when they travel in long distance use this ability. For instance, when they want to migrate from cold climate to warm climate. In short travel, like moving from one side to another, they just use their eyes and lights to find correct location, not their ability, so in this case birds can not find correct locationn and they will injured.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ful lines or designs window glass, birds will not injured. In contrary, the profe...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'injure'
Suggestion: injure
...r designs window glass, birds will not injured. In contrary, the professor in the lect...
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Line 9, column 591, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'injure'
Suggestion: injure
...ot find correct locationn and they will injured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, third, while, for instance, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18430049193 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4760497834 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449319534821 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180745212271 0.0996497079465 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805557915753 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253272810033 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066550224934 0.0443174109184 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.