working 4 days in week instead of 5 days
The article states that, working four days per week would cause positive effects for company like economic benefits, and increase of quality of employees. Whereas, the professor believe the exact opposite by stating some reasons.
Firstly, the reading claims that, by working four days companies benefit going to increase so, they will face fewer financial problems. The professor refuse this point by saying that four day of working Force Company to spend more money. Because the company should spend money on health benefits and even new computer which cost more than paying employees to work 5 days per week.
Secondly, the article posits, the primary benefits of offering a four day working would reduce unemployment races. However the professor says that by working four days may companies expectation would increase .As a matter of fact employees should work over times to work four days with the quality of working five days .
Thirdly, the reading claims that, employees could afford lower salary but they can spend more time with their families, or they can do their private stuff. However the professor opposes this point by explaining that more free time in personal life may be harmful for their career and they can’t get a chance to improve their career because companies would past over the promotion to those who works 5 day in week as a result they may lose this opportunity as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., and increase of quality of employees. Whereas, the professor believe the exact opposi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing employees to work 5 days per week. Secondly, the article posits, the primar...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...orking would reduce unemployment races. However the professor says that by working four...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...may companies expectation would increase .As a matter of fact employees should wor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...y companies expectation would increase .As a matter of fact employees should work ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y companies expectation would increase .As a matter of fact employees should work ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ys with the quality of working five days . Thirdly, the reading claims that, e...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to low', 'to lower'
Suggestion: to low; to lower
...ing claims that, employees could afford lower salary but they can spend more time wit...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es, or they can do their private stuff. However the professor opposes this point by exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07296137339 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30938526062 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557939914163 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.989524047 49.2860985944 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06452816374 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35904685695 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177493535274 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117254482928 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247298102844 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113842569707 0.0443174109184 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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