Why do you want to study in this university
The development of technology has just started; the world is significantly improved after just ten years thanks to technology. I chose to follow the computer science career because I want to be a part of this positive change in the world. I find myself different reasons why unist is an ideal destination for me. studying at the first-rated university in a technology-leading country, I not only be able to obtain lots of unique and valuable knowledge from erudite professors but also fully expose my potential. Additionally, unist is a place, where students with the best minds gather, possess a competitive environment. this is certainly a big boost for me to improve myself every day. The tutoring program the unist offers is also an attractive factor because it is the golden chance for me to enhance my knowledge, open my social network, and improve my soft skills. through some conversations with my friends, who are currently unist’s students, and watching videos about unist university, I am absolutely appealed by its facilities, policies, and professors’ contributions to the world. Being in the university with a contributing spirit is a motivation for me to devote my effort to different fields. Moreover, I am able to obtain, develop, and spread parts of unist’s traditions, teaching, and studying methods to everyone all over the world through my products. Living in a new environment is sure to be difficult for me, but I am confident that my flexibility will help me adapt to college life at unist soon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...her, possess a competitive environment. this is certainly a big boost for me to impr...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
... improve myself every day. The tutoring program the unist offers is also an attractive ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Through
...al network, and improve my soft skills. through some conversations with my friends, who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16680590059 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.358680539 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947638427432 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393701724781 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040140113349 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947638427432 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.