Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about increases in age means discrimination inceases in the workplace. While it is possible to claim that skill rather than age must be criteria for promotion or dismissal in the workplace, my view is that the skill/talent outweith the age for discriminatin which looks to be opt reason. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of argument.
There are several reasons why age should not considered for dismissal. One of them is that talen of individual sets the moral and eligbilities for job. It can also be argued that people with higher age means he/she can play a mentor roles and become insipiration for others. It should also be taken into account that skill wins the goal of individual and company as well which comes with increase in age.
Those who argue for age must be criteria to get dismissal for individual means they look them as burdon over company. Ihave a different view and say that it can be actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that no jobs opportunity for new graduated person if old person stays longer . Then, there are concerns about unemployment may increase and causes a situation of frustration for new graduated person.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that age is no outlook which direct eligibility to consider as a good employee. I would strongly recommend that skill comes first to serve goal of individual or group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77307692308 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65747413682 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1062881791 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4615384615 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227311498866 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081563984628 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551233021217 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137465423117 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050106631172 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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