People pursue dangerous activities like skydiving, motorcycle sports, white-water river rafting etc. Do you support? If yes, why and if not, why?
In today's world, people are aware of notion with sports influences on individual for developing the career. While it is claimed that some activities are prejudiced to human and provide life threat. Some people argue that activities like skydiving, motorcycle , white-water river rafting are treated as adventure games. In this essay, I shall discuss point of view by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
Firstly, People considering these activities as adventure which are treated as bravery in social lives. Some people argue that doing these extra ordinary tasks, they may get celebrity status. For example, while sky diving activities start, claim lots of advertisement which are other mean of earning. Other example, people ride the Mount Everest as mark of feat achievement. In addition, people pursuing these tasks, consider themselves as a hero to prove everything possible.
Secondly, people those argue these activities are prejudiced to human's life and claim it is not accurate adventure tasks. It is argued that people while performing these tasks loose their life which cause huge catastrophic for their families. In addition, it has been seen that teenagers perform these task to get taste of adventure and cross personal fear factor.
In recapitulate, there are some positives and negatives around this argument and I believe in notion to emphasize these activities but with controlled environment of safety and measurements. I would recommend people keen their interest should pay attention to the directive of equipment and read thoroughly all norms and rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45967741935 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76407938318 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5299214981 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154595509031 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597320619308 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838970796419 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943290668728 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622032999683 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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