In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Undoubtedly, the cashless society has been a controversial issue in the past few years. we are now in the era of industry 4.0, and people tend to use easy ways of payment such as online payments, credit card and so on. What good or bad will it bring to our life is worth discussing.
To begin with, people are willing to use cashless payments due to the fact that it is convenient and fast. The reason is that people only need to carry a smartphone or a credit card to complete the payment, instead of carrying a wallet and a wad of cash. For example, when people check out at the supermarket counter, they only need a scan or a swipe, no cash, no change, no waiting.
However, there is no denying that the cashless transaction brings convenience to our life, but it also brings some risks. It should be pointed out that criminals can easily try to steal credit cards or mobile phones, or the information on them. For instance, there is a hacker managed to break into a bank account and steak tens of thousands of yuan by stealing personal information in 2013. Therefore, what needs our attention is that we should pay attention to some safety issues while enjoying convenience.
In a nutshell, having considered all arguments above, we may reach the conclusion that cashless society seems to be a reality due to the huge convenient. Even though there are some risks, these problems will be solved as the security is upgraded and the system is improved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68461538462 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62187825082 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5066600925 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.5 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147839050504 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524633231185 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425775032836 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867648448225 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477715582538 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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