Do you think consumer should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of producers?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection a typical day reveals that up packaged product is avoided by consumer has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the responsibility of producers. This essay is an attempt to both accept before arriving at a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are certain reason behind the over packaged products should be avoided by consumer. The first view point in my mind it is create a lot of environment problem such as most of people over thing are throw the garbage and inside the road or street face on damage environment .In order to be ample of people suffering for chronic disease.
On the other hand, it is the responsibility of producers factor that contributes to the spread of this menace is eventually results in increment of rate of a particular products. I would cite an example of expensive price of food packaging such as dominos and Mcdonald’s are more extra charges.
Before putting my pen down I would like to encapsulate my viewpoint saying that should be avoid over packaging products controlled by time to time otherwise it will be lead planet to an end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
.... The first view point in my mind it is create a lot of environment problem such as mo...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...te a lot of environment problem such as most of people over thing are throw the garbage and in...
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oad or street face on damage environment .In order to be ample of people suffering...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...d or street face on damage environment .In order to be ample of people suffering f...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...ts in increment of rate of a particular products. I would cite an example of expensive p...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'avoided'?
Suggestion: avoided
...late my viewpoint saying that should be avoid over packaging products controlled by t...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y time to time otherwise it will be lead planet to an end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89908256881 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87084142614 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6159180344 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245448633389 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915730733153 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089988776237 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129229767152 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264729569531 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.