Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products , or is it the responsibility of producers?
Now in the modern era, many people belive that pack product is the good for buy as compare to open products. But some people says that to buy package product is not good for health. I will shed light on both vies in further paragraph.
On the one hand, many want to bay package product because they say that in package product have good quality as compare to open products. Further, in open product there are lots of many dust particle are there. When we buy pack product it is the responsibility of producers when the thing were expire or have bacteria on them. Also, when we buy thing from mall it is good as compare to buy things from local. To buy things from mall very useful because they gives us guarantee on the product.
On the other hand, some individuals things that to buy pack thing is not good because when person buy pack vegetable they don't know the vegetable is fresh or not suppose the vegetable is not fresh they have many disease which is very harmful for body.
To sum up with, every coin has two sides, this essay is also contain both sides but I think is that person buy pack things but not like vegetable,fruit because it is risk of life. They buy things like clothes, tv computer etcetera.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
...further paragraph. On the one hand, many want to bay package product because they say...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun dust seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much dust', 'a good deal of dust'.
Suggestion: much dust; a good deal of dust
...ther, in open product there are lots of many dust particle are there. When we buy pack pr...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct it is the responsibility of producers when the thing were expire or have bacte...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...onsibility of producers when the thing were expire or have bacteria on them. Also, ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expired'.
Suggestion: expired
...ility of producers when the thing were expire or have bacteria on them. Also, when we...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...ings from mall very useful because they gives us guarantee on the product. On the ...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...use when person buy pack vegetable they dont know the vegetable is fresh or not supp...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...resh or not suppose the vegetable is not fresh they have many disease which is ve...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...e the vegetable is not fresh they have many disease which is very harmful for body. To ...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fruit
...n buy pack things but not like vegetable,fruit because it is risk of life. They buy th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20439964112 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9910223887 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8181818182 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102536300225 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518747494644 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528893996732 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597811721444 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519447028162 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.5310837438 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.32886699507 81% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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