Does television removes our loneliness or not?
In this burgeoning epoch of removing loneliness with the help of television, a contemporary human dwells in a world that is shaped by the latest trends and technology coming across the globe points for years. The opponents and proponents have their perceptual intellection to support their ideas. Before deducing a fair conclusion, I am going to shed some light on both aspects of the upcoming paragraphs.
According to the first school of thought, people say that television has a great impact on its audience, people can entertain themselves by watching different kinds of movies, drama series like games of thrones and many more to kill their loneliness. Moreover, students can watch TV to gain knowledge and those who are interested in politics can watch news channels to keep themselves up-to-date. Furthermore, the advertisement that comes on television is a great source of getting information related to the launch of new products and medicines in the market.
However, every coin has two sides, people believe that TV has corrupted the young generation because they spent almost all of their time watching useless shows on television. Apart from that, TV has a great influence on people's lifestyles, the masses watch famous celebrities on television and try to be like them. Last but not least, it makes individuals antisocial due to the fact that they spent almost every hour watching TV.
To parorate, after having a lot of thoughts and deliberation with myself on this topic, I inclined to state that yes television sure help us to get rid of our boredom and loneliness but we cannot ignore the fact that it also creates a distraction for the young generation and everybody knows that access of everything is bad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...on peoples lifestyles, the masses watch famous celebrities on television and try to be like them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08741258741 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84864626868 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8273928026 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131589562874 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412883924514 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480492584533 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730335578117 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040004853908 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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