Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
To learn any discipline effectively one need to combine his time, peace and comfort. Some individuals believe that education and employment distract each other and thus, both study and job cannot go hand in hand. This essay will discuss the valid points that why study and employment can go hand in hand with some examples.
To commence with, in present era, getting excel in one's own domain as per the job's requirement has become the requisite for the employees. More specifically, while doing the job many professionals also used to pursue course specific to their profile to enhance their potentials and skills. An IT professional, for example, always need to keep himself updated about the new software's in their industry. Thus, it becomes imperative to carry out their study with their employment and this way both occurs simultaneously.
Furthermore, if someone is really dedicated towards his goals then it is no more insurmountable to learn and do job . Undeniably, pursuing a degree with a job is more of a hectic schedule and requires a huge amount of time, concentration and peace. But if someone is really devoted to advance his career further then he can pursue both simultaneously. According to a survey held at Wipro, in 2016,in India, 80% of their employees were engaged with certain kind of course related to their field. In short, study and job both can go together if someone has a real zeal towards his goal.
This essay has argued that how both education and employment can go together with full dedication. In my way of opinion, it is an effective way to carry out both study and job together to save time and to advance the respective skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...ing excel in ones own domain as per the jobs requirement has become the requisite fo...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'An' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: An; IT
...to enhance their potentials and skills. An IT professional, for example, always need ...
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Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... more insurmountable to learn and do job . Undeniably, pursuing a degree with a jo...
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Line 6, column 313, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y devoted to advance his career further then he can pursue both simultaneously. Acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, then, thus, while, for example, in short, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9014084507 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78923313539 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.5015697955 50.4703680194 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19435155826 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722037992331 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538882205797 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124936275892 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507258652344 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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