extreme sport

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extreme sport

In this burgeoning epoch of science and technology, the contemporary human dwells in the world which is perennially shaped by the latest trends and approaches coming across the globe. Whether extreme sports beneficial for individuals or not has been a bone of contention and feud for manifold years. The upcoming paragraphs will exaggerate the propitious aspects of the aforementioned text and thus will lead to plausible conclusion.

To commence with, there are oodles of perspective to glimpse on this viewpoint. Firstly, extreme sports play vital role in everyone's life. The most conspicuous one is that extreme sports include various activities such as bungee jumping, paragliding, water rafting and so on. Players learn many skills like communication, leadership from extreme activities. It helps to make people fearless. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead as far as extreme sports is concerned.

Paradoxically, on the other side of the fence an opposing case can possible be made. Radically, it is not a cup of tea for every people because it is very dangerous sport. Concomitantly, it is very expensive and trainers are not available easily. However, the one who advocates this viewpoint fails to see the picture in larger context.

To conclude, after having a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with myself, I hereby, come to the conclusion that indeed extreme sports has some advantages, but negative side should be taken into the moderate considerable cognizance.

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Average: 9.3 (4 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33193277311 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00848845004 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693277310924 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0198540786 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407548047542 0.242375264174 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120033018325 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133787662937 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214623497339 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141441648101 0.0609392437508 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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