The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that personal cars and airplanes are now essentials of life than luxuries in past. Critics, however, claim that these innovations force people to adapt unhealthy lifestyles. I, personally think that we are blessed with these technological advancements in this comtemporary world.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments to discuss this fact that cars and airplanes are quiet essential requirnment of this society. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that people can enjoy loud music and ventilation in their personal cars. Moreover, they have a freedom to travel from place to another in short period of time. As a prime example, having personal vehicle, we are free to avoid congestion and punctuality of public transports.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that invention of aircraft in technological world is an amazing innovation to travel longest distance in short interval of time. In addition, it promotes relations among business tycoons to travel and expand their business all around the world. But there is always another flip side of a coin. These travelling modes invite unhealthy lifestyles and make people more prone to develop health related issues. But this statement does not hold fully water.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propound that airplanes and cars are more effective modes of travelling. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...re now essentials of life than luxuries in past. Critics, however, claim that these inn...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...heir personal cars. Moreover, they have a freedom to travel from place to another in shor...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o travel from place to another in short period of time. As a prime example, having personal ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37959183673 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636734693878 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4672848675 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897300391174 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287984575601 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560395686355 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625147359634 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407715351185 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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