It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or not?
The importance of people think that it is usually foolish to get married before completing studies has now debatable in recent years. It can be agreed that it has some great impact but it has some drawbacks that people have to think that if girls are married before some age than it is good for their life and future also but in today's culture people think different so all parents and other members of family think that if they are first to complete there study, then getting a good job after that if they get married is enough good. This essay will elaborate on how people think about this topic and how much percentage of people agree with that.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why some old culture people thinking that after the age of 18 girls have to get married to some man than her future is going to be good. why? As an example, If people get married before 18 or before completing their study than how we know they are happy or not. In 1990 in one family there are 2 girls and 1 boy are there so, after completing the age of 18 her parents and family member decided her marriage with one guy but after marriage that family don't take care of girl so this is usually foolish thought that after marriage they getting settled. Thus, play a vital role in this topic.
However, It can be agreed that it has some disadvantages and some people steams to be very different manner. Which includes If girls are enough capable to complete there study than why people do this foolish things. As an example, If they are clever so after study If they want to start there carrier than all people must support them for that because If they are established good job than it is very helpful for family also. Hence is not always worth.
It can be concluded that one would better strike a balance between what is beneficial and what can be harmful. Hence, it is always advisable to direct one's effort in this right direction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Why
...an than her future is going to be good. why? As an example, If people get married b...
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Suggestion: don't
... one guy but after marriage that family dont take care of girl so this is usually fo...
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Suggestion: as well
... job than it is very helpful for family also. Hence is not always worth. It c...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...han it is very helpful for family also. Hence is not always worth. It can be c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.5418719212 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 20.9802955665 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 355.0 242.827586207 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45633802817 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11520224555 2.71678728327 78% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.580463131201 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.9348001188 50.4703680194 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276553109116 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102165835946 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110829304703 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157806852895 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106705825293 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.1260098522 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.94827586207 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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