Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples
In several past years, shopping malls popularity has grown rapidly and are transforming urban lifestyle. They are everywhere and are replacing small shops. The subject arouses two different opinions – are large shopping malls are good or bad. Many people are of the opinion that these shopping malls are coming at the cost of small shops while others think that large malls are the need of the hour. I will give my opinion after analyzing both the sides.
The major reason that people are preferring malls is the convenience of getting our daily needs including groceries, clothes, shoes, books etc under one roof along with cinemas and entertainment arcades making it a one-stop solution. The people backing the idea of promoting mall culture supports it with the fact that it not only saves a lot of time of shopping in-fact saves time from bargaining also as things are available at fixed prices.
Regardless of their endless advantages, they do have some disadvantages. The malls are taking away local and small shops thus the decision to promote large shopping malls taking the bread out of the mouths of many people. The shopkeepers are left with no means of earning a living. Only a few customers buy products from small local shops and the practice is greatly affecting the local economy. Moreover, in malls, people are tempted to buy unnecessary things hence burning a hole in their pocket.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... sides. The major reason that people are preferring malls is the convenience of getting our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49653595112 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3575530239 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287539401892 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103260108615 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831464019243 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187626606107 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100454359779 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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