Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
The substantial influences of large shopping malls on small shops have sparked a controversy on the globe. Although specific arguments claimed that gigantic markets are beneficial, a group of intellectuals debate otherwise and hold an opponent's view. I am highly inclined to accept that small local markets must be highly supported by locals and residents. The agenda of this article is to discuss both sides and will lead to a legitimate conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why large shopping complexes are supported, but the most remarkable one lies in the fact that big brands are happy to share luxurious shopping buildings. Based on recently study outcomes, conducted on a group of profound economic researchers in a renowned university, 85% of the famous brand markets are strictly controlled by large stores. Moreover, central markets have been significantly important for taxpayers, government's income and tax on sales income. Hence the influences of large shopping malls in economic growth, income tax, sales psychologies, shoppers' behaviours, supply chain management, as well as middle-class life are evident.
Contrary to popular belief, there remain drawbacks clouded the potential influences of chain stores, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that local stores hire more sale's agents and store workers. Moreover, it is strongly claimed that local economic growth is highly correlated with one day markets. For instance, when I was young, I earned money by working at nearby small groceries stores. Therefore, the importance of chained supermarkets and its detriments which may affect adversely on the local economy, job opportunities, small stores, delivery and advertisement agencies could be seen with clarity.
To recapitulate, while there are several divergent opinions on both sides, my sentiment is that the benefits of small shops take more credence than shopping malls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50841750842 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91746518821 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7542930406 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.846153846 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185610626919 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638735880482 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616042886635 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113118132276 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384326645593 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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