Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?
These days, shopping mall culture is of paramount importance in our fantasy lifestyle. One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is that small shops are becoming obsolete by massive growth of large shopping malls. I am of the opinion that yet in the interest of the people, large shopping malls have been boomed at a rapid pace that benefits the people from various aspects when smalls shop cannot be part of. Thus, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are numerous arguments to support my stance, but the most preponderant one is that it is easy to approach a large mall for shopping as it holds different shops in a single place. Not only these shops reduce wastage of time for shopping, but also helps in providing a convenient factor by shopping different products in a single shop or different shop that is nearby, which is impossible in small shops. For example, Express Avenue in India is one of the best shopping mall to the people who prefer different items like cloths, fashion things, kids zone and theatre. Needless to say, all these merits stand large shopping malls in good stead, as far as to time-consuming and convenient factor is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that small shops in mall is cost effective. Besides, due to various offers or discounts of the sale products, it ultimately reduces the product price, and it also brings best parking spot which is one of the worrying factor in small shops. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the large shopping mall.
To recapitulate, I second my outlook of large shopping malls, which benefits the people largely despite some drawbacks that can be negligible, and its merits are indeed too great to ignore it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, look, second, so, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97333333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63030205279 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6123137255 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277679898319 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11420695334 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469470035488 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171658794937 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617026330535 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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