Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
In contemporary era, the human society is forging ahead at an amazing rate in various realms. Yet, at the same time, many problems have arisen, the grave issue that whether parents take responsibility for their children’s act has triggered intense controversy. In my opinion, parents, as supervisors, ought to responsible for children’s act when they are young.
Undeniably, there is widely believed perception that parents are the first teachers for their children More specifically, parents’ speeches and behaviors to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-forming and future development. The research shows that those who born in an abusive environment is more likely to grow up with the tendency for violence.
Furthermore, it should recognize that children, other than adults, are not aware of the consequences of their behavior. In particular, parents have a duty of supervision of their children especially when they do not have ability to distinguish what is right and wrong. when I was three, I often like to throw food to the ground at meal time, my parents had to spend more time to clean it every time. Later on, they required me to clean the dinner room everyday and I recognized that it is not easy to pick up the food on the floor. Thus, I no longer throw any food.
To summarize, from what has been discussed, I highly support the idea that parents should pay for their children’s act and need to cultivate children’s social responsibility and principle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24596774194 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26237089641 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8351247466 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260563412822 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939699054259 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800584126435 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170942470442 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056472732067 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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