Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
one of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is affecting personal life due to spending too much time on work in all over the world. there is a wide range of factors that account why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken.
there is a myriad reason of this soaring concern, unlike everyday problem, which can be dealt with easily, shortage of time, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of issues such as relationship problems and growth of children. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it can not only affect people but also society can suffer immensely.
steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most important is in fact not only a remote and unexpected, but also accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the facts that by ensuring implementation of fact and policies, the government authorities can help a native thrive. Besides, international organization and local authorities should take all necessary initiative cumulatively. only when – in all sectors are ensured, then there is a chance to see the progress in curbing the issue.
To conclude, dealing with work-life balance is one of the prevalent problems that face people all over the world. Nevertheless, concrete steps discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing issue. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18987341772 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94564332753 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9335157019 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354540286486 0.242375264174 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0122736338997 0.0925447433944 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246928852142 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0236210076289 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216164538711 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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