Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
one of the conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that personal development is the base for professional development. there is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. Most preponderant one is that personal development can not only contribute to professional development but also leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers, not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when only one follows such a system, they broaden their horizons, thus learning such attributes as dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of personal development.
In the views of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of personal development are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09170305677 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0084642517 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1067751067 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251414035961 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882897730593 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944244181952 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147949450965 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651964656095 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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