Adventurous sports is not a new phenomenon. But this trend has gain a momentum in now a days. Some people think extreme sports may dangerous, whereas other people think it gives thrill. However there are both advantages and disadvantages, which I will explain throughout this essay.
On the one hand, there are several benefits to extreme sports are aplenty. The most remarkable merit to this is enhance fear management skills. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed a academic research which discovered gain a sense of humility. In the same way, dangerous sports helps us to boost your self-confidence. In addition, risky sports increases the balance.
On the other hand, the potential drawbacks involved in risky sports can be barely be overlooked. The worst possible loss from this is some times it misleads to death. Aa a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of dangerous sports is correlated with risk taking sports. Besides, it leads to severe injuries during gaming.
therefore on the basis of all points discussed till now and going by my personal experience as well, i would like to state in conclusion that, since the positives outweighs the negatives, all the negatives can easily be redressed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20560747664 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93800026822 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64953271028 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0247193993 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180183969722 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668035875223 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873587297823 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976279973557 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686780491951 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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