Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Recently,owing pets has been the subject of debate among people in several societies. While a vast number of communities interpret the impact of living with animals as thoroughly constructive, some others hold a negative attitude. personally, I firmly agree with the assertion that making differences in our lifestyle can bring positive effects to our manner.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why I support possessing pets. First of all, it is maintained that having feeling to an animal plays a pivotal role in developing adroit individuals and arousing a wonderful sense of accomplishment and competence which consequently can result in opening avenues to new achievements. Therefore, their enthusiasm and self-confidence will be amplified toward many daunting tasks. Specifically, a recent empirical extensive research study conducted by Yale University in 2015 has revealed that being with other living creatures could enhance a person`s intellectual ability to make deliberate decisions.
Furthermore, it is presumed that feeling not alone is as good as mental exercises. Gone are the days that some people used to avoid having a dog or cat at home. To put it more simply, it is believed that if individuals want to have a prosperous future, they should take this into consideration that being close to animals can make us more caring about other people because it makes us more sensitive, which results in a more beautiful community. In my own experience, a friend of mine used to spend all her free time with a panda. As these examples illustrate, the benefits of having a pet are obvious.
Due to the reasons mentioned above, although there are compelling arguments in favor of both sides, my personal sentiment is that pets can bring happiness to our lives. Not feeling alone and have and care about something could make us a better person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, while, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2582781457 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03496285275 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2678548738 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155682150547 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478046987301 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038198284117 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858317414383 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372362743213 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.